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Thursday 18 September 2014

The Fence


THE FENCE
The girl was standing by the fence as the wind passed over her skin.  She stared at the clouds mumbling under her breath.  She felt alone and hurt since her grandmother had gone. She stood next to the fence because that was where her nana walked her up and down when she was little girl.  Now she walks alone and still can smell her nana, sense her and see her smile but she is not there anymore.

3 comments:

Jharda'e said...
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Jharda'e said...

Hi Tatiana, I really like how you described the girl in not just one word but in many you described what she did and what she remembered her nana doing.

Keep up the Tino Pai work.

From: Jhardae

Anonymous said...

Beautifully well written Tatiana, Well done!

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